Es ist nicht gerade mein Ding, aber nicht schlecht
8/10
Baustelle Tunnel SF-LS
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@ Dotox
ZitatGuten Abend, ich nochmal.
Ich habe das nun erfolgreich eingebaut, die Fahrzeuge sind vorhanden, die Objekte aber nicht.
Jemand einen Rat?
Liebe Grüße.
Welche Fahrzeuge, in der Map sind doch gar keine...
Deine Fahrzeuge müssen unter den Objekten im Skript hin
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Finde ich gut!! 8/10
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nicht schlecht aber könnte auch besser sein aber schon sehr gut
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Meiner Meinung nach könnte man noch ein paar Einzelheiten hinzufügen.
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@ Dotox
Welche Fahrzeuge, in der Map sind doch gar keine...
Deine Fahrzeuge müssen unter den Objekten im Skript hin
Huhu.Les dir doch die Beiträge davor durch.
Ein User hat das in einer .pwn datei zu verfügung gestellt:
Das ist eine Map Datei, keine PWN
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Als PWN würds so aussehen:[tab='Der Code ist im rechten Tab']Code im rechten Tab [tab='Code']AddStaticVehicleEx(407,-1696.84667969,-750.94116211,39.41520309,242.35754395,3,1,15); //Firetruck
AddStaticVehicleEx(597,-1639.95324707,-779.20690918,44.51839447,0.00000000,-1,-1,15); //Police Car (SFPD)
AddStaticVehicleEx(490,-1671.27880859,-765.31250000,42.18014526,359.91491699,3,1,15); //FBI Rancher
AddStaticVehicleEx(524,-1593.54455566,-797.43585205,49.87866974,76.05255127,-1,-1,15); //Cement Truck
AddStaticVehicleEx(574,-1568.42065430,-805.43194580,51.18227386,0.00000000,-1,-1,15); //Sweeper
AddStaticVehicleEx(574,-1541.28222656,-805.73339844,54.63549805,90.00000000,-1,-1,15); //Sweeper
CreateObject(1238,-1752.40039062,-693.67950439,25.45864487,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (1)
CreateObject(1238,-1753.82336426,-697.65673828,26.04988670,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (2)
CreateObject(1238,-1754.76013184,-702.28131104,26.81466675,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (3)
CreateObject(1238,-1752.74047852,-709.88995361,28.05176735,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (4)
CreateObject(1238,-1747.37207031,-717.32110596,29.40469742,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (5)
CreateObject(1238,-1741.30090332,-724.51098633,30.77700806,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (6)
CreateObject(1238,-1734.66638184,-730.46258545,32.17410660,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (7)
CreateObject(1238,-1728.14758301,-735.59777832,33.58861923,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (8)
CreateObject(1238,-1721.69494629,-740.26287842,35.00201797,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (9)
CreateObject(1238,-1714.34692383,-744.86584473,36.33197784,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (10)
CreateObject(1238,-1707.03283691,-749.30841064,37.42442322,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (11)
CreateObject(1238,-1699.58569336,-753.53778076,38.37154770,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (12)
CreateObject(1238,-1692.27465820,-757.67224121,39.23666763,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (13)
CreateObject(1238,-1684.66198730,-761.86785889,40.07928085,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (14)
CreateObject(1238,-1669.54223633,-769.81884766,41.55723190,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (16)
CreateObject(1238,-1661.61193848,-773.76446533,42.25313187,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (17)
CreateObject(1238,-1653.52990723,-777.56213379,42.93980026,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (18)
CreateObject(1238,-1645.25390625,-781.10198975,43.68255234,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (19)
CreateObject(1238,-1637.12683105,-784.68060303,44.44727707,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (20)
CreateObject(1238,-1629.06054688,-788.05877686,45.21696854,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (21)
CreateObject(1238,-1620.75671387,-791.28643799,45.96842194,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (22)
CreateObject(1238,-1612.34472656,-794.30572510,46.70652008,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (23)
CreateObject(1238,-1603.79174805,-797.38806152,47.39300919,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (24)
CreateObject(1238,-1595.31628418,-800.27545166,48.12348175,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (25)
CreateObject(1238,-1586.79931641,-802.92712402,48.90044403,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (26)
CreateObject(1238,-1578.38842773,-805.56622314,49.73501205,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (27)
CreateObject(1238,-1569.93676758,-808.00244141,50.60705566,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (28)
CreateObject(1238,-1561.22302246,-810.29016113,51.57270050,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (29)
CreateObject(1238,-1552.47448730,-812.19458008,52.60345840,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (30)
CreateObject(1238,-1543.91284180,-813.94635010,53.67173767,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (31)
CreateObject(1238,-1535.05920410,-815.47210693,54.91080856,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (32)
CreateObject(1238,-1526.40881348,-817.06683350,56.21019745,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (33)
CreateObject(1238,-1517.91271973,-818.36822510,57.69314194,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (34)
CreateObject(1238,-1513.97058105,-815.90435791,58.29977798,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (35)
CreateObject(1238,-1510.70703125,-813.29156494,58.88788223,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (36)
CreateObject(3526,-1708.93029785,-753.23962402,37.19639587,0.00000000,0.00000000,334.00000000); //object(vegasairportlight) (1)
CreateObject(3526,-1701.78137207,-757.25164795,38.09580612,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (2)
CreateObject(3526,-1694.59179688,-761.68237305,38.95581055,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (3)
CreateObject(3526,-1686.90112305,-765.97235107,39.80811310,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (4)
CreateObject(3526,-1716.05126953,-749.16577148,36.18818665,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (5)
CreateObject(3526,-1724.17089844,-744.38677979,34.82152939,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (6)
CreateObject(3526,-1730.29138184,-739.02044678,33.44748688,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (7)
CreateObject(3526,-1737.17810059,-733.32501221,31.96547127,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (8)
CreateObject(3526,-1743.65722656,-726.90423584,30.59917641,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (9)
CreateObject(3526,-1750.16809082,-719.72326660,29.29410172,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (10)
CreateObject(3526,-1755.44628906,-712.18444824,27.98724365,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (11)
CreateObject(3526,-1758.99060059,-705.11529541,26.82556152,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (12)
CreateObject(3526,-1759.30444336,-699.08880615,25.84779358,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (13)
CreateObject(3526,-1759.04870605,-693.94458008,24.92044640,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (14)
CreateObject(3526,-1760.58398438,-688.24090576,23.84506035,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (15)
CreateObject(3526,-1678.97473145,-770.03857422,40.61363983,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (16)
CreateObject(3526,-1671.62097168,-774.14074707,41.28909302,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (17)
CreateObject(3526,-1663.24169922,-778.04199219,42.01221085,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (18)
CreateObject(3526,-1655.20520020,-781.62573242,42.68322754,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (19)
CreateObject(3526,-1647.15502930,-785.33648682,43.40499496,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (20)
CreateObject(3526,-1638.83203125,-788.79748535,44.17952347,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (21)
CreateObject(3526,-1630.60058594,-792.12933350,44.95206070,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (22)
CreateObject(3526,-1621.90710449,-795.06793213,45.72273636,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (23)
CreateObject(3526,-1613.97924805,-798.15148926,46.42438126,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (24)
CreateObject(3526,-1605.12805176,-801.66809082,47.13525009,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (25)
CreateObject(3526,-1596.13732910,-804.45153809,47.90130234,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (26)
CreateObject(3526,-1587.86547852,-807.75555420,48.66391373,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (27)
CreateObject(3526,-1579.90368652,-810.28680420,49.45463181,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (28)
CreateObject(3526,-1571.12231445,-812.63995361,50.34744263,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (29)
CreateObject(3526,-1562.25878906,-814.98486328,51.31321335,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (30)
CreateObject(3526,-1552.97607422,-816.86248779,52.41117096,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (31)
CreateObject(3526,-1544.23828125,-818.38464355,53.47675323,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (32)
CreateObject(3526,-1535.57543945,-819.85858154,54.69289780,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (33)
CreateObject(3526,-1526.67321777,-821.58959961,56.04317474,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (34)
CreateObject(3526,-1517.97705078,-822.56793213,57.53420258,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (35)
CreateObject(3526,-1513.12536621,-820.65802002,58.34543991,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (36)
CreateObject(3526,-1508.86437988,-819.56439209,59.28640366,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (37)
CreateObject(3526,-1503.80078125,-820.10479736,60.46548462,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (38)
CreateObject(1238,-1506.39575195,-813.88964844,59.83749390,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (67)
CreateObject(1238,-1502.10473633,-814.35363770,60.78552246,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (68)
CreateObject(3526,-1514.77941895,-828.96771240,58.59036255,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (39)
CreateObject(3526,-1509.51904297,-826.20764160,59.49300385,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (40)
CreateObject(3526,-1503.73571777,-826.07568359,60.68610764,0.00000000,0.00000000,333.99536133); //object(vegasairportlight) (41)
CreateObject(1383,-1605.13256836,-739.27459717,11.52873421,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(twrcrane_m_04) (1)
CreateObject(1384,-1605.02966309,-739.34069824,43.93096161,1.00000000,0.25000000,194.49557495); //object(twrcrane_m_01) (1)
CreateObject(16337,-1615.95739746,-788.05108643,45.92082977,355.00000000,0.00000000,73.50000000); //object(des_cranecontrol) (1)
CreateObject(16337,-1618.61791992,-787.19409180,45.72223663,356.49572754,0.00000000,73.49853516); //object(des_cranecontrol) (2)
CreateObject(8879,-1716.27087402,-738.98175049,34.31318665,0.00000000,0.00000000,232.25006104); //object(vgsecnstrct08) (1)
CreateObject(8879,-1659.53833008,-770.57501221,40.83640289,0.00000000,0.00000000,244.24548340); //object(vgsecnstrct08) (2)
CreateObject(8879,-1520.94873047,-813.72216797,55.94906235,0.00000000,0.00000000,73.24258423); //object(vgsecnstrct08) (3)
CreateObject(8879,-1574.40563965,-802.75952148,48.74359894,0.00000000,0.00000000,69.24035645); //object(vgsecnstrct08) (4)
CreateObject(931,-1611.44714355,-789.77728271,47.43572235,0.00000000,356.75000000,343.00000000); //object(rack3) (1)
CreateObject(931,-1609.12036133,-790.48565674,47.57519913,0.00000000,356.74804688,342.99865723); //object(rack3) (2)
CreateObject(1348,-1613.81677246,-789.56274414,46.87765884,0.00000000,354.25000000,0.00000000); //object(cj_o2tanks) (1)
CreateObject(1348,-1669.37463379,-761.15704346,42.06280518,0.00000000,354.24865723,0.00000000); //object(cj_o2tanks) (2)
CreateObject(2669,-1681.80163574,-759.68743896,41.26362610,356.25018311,359.49896240,43.96722412); //object(cj_chris_crate) (1)
CreateObject(3633,-1683.27465820,-758.74371338,40.54814911,0.00000000,0.00000000,42.75000000); //object(imoildrum4_las) (1)
CreateObject(3633,-1682.23059082,-759.87689209,40.52171326,0.00000000,0.00000000,42.74780273); //object(imoildrum4_las) (2)
CreateObject(3633,-1680.14855957,-760.66613770,40.64397430,0.00000000,0.00000000,42.74780273); //object(imoildrum4_las) (3)
CreateObject(1348,-1681.54187012,-758.77856445,40.83197403,0.00000000,354.24865723,316.75000000); //object(cj_o2tanks) (3)
CreateObject(17055,-1665.06774902,-768.09283447,43.80596924,0.00000000,357.00000000,338.00000000); //object(cw_fueldrum03) (1)
CreateObject(1322,-1768.28662109,-683.08374023,24.73040009,0.00000000,0.00000000,86.00000000); //object(ws_roadwarning_02) (1)
CreateObject(1322,-1754.34265137,-680.63623047,24.40593147,0.00000000,0.00000000,85.99548340); //object(ws_roadwarning_02) (2)
CreateObject(1322,-1558.27990723,-821.74963379,53.66337204,0.00000000,0.00000000,158.49548340); //object(ws_roadwarning_02) (3)
CreateObject(1322,-1473.22094727,-814.60797119,69.82605743,0.00000000,0.00000000,352.49426270); //object(ws_roadwarning_02) (4)
CreateObject(1322,-1682.45764160,-763.01916504,41.47257233,0.00000000,0.00000000,352.49084473); //object(ws_roadwarning_02) (5)
CreateObject(3091,-1512.53112793,-813.88812256,58.45726776,0.00000000,6.25000000,234.74993896); //object(imy_track_barrier) (1)
CreateObject(3091,-1515.55175781,-817.37542725,57.93325806,0.00000000,4.49572754,214.74487305); //object(imy_track_barrier) (2)
CreateObject(3091,-1753.11828613,-695.32800293,25.47649193,1.22903442,349.49328613,253.47277832); //object(imy_track_barrier) (3)
CreateObject(3091,-1754.46606445,-699.61090088,26.41303062,1.22784424,350.24172974,253.45503235); //object(imy_track_barrier) (4)
CreateObject(8843,-1761.48889160,-699.61907959,25.81000710,9.24432373,2.02633667,191.67442322); //object(arrows01_lvs) (1)
CreateObject(17969,-1689.75231934,-746.44934082,40.87872314,0.00000000,0.00000000,60.25000000); //object(hub_graffitti) (1)
CreateObject(1529,-1684.82006836,-774.15838623,42.08385468,0.00000000,0.00000000,242.00000000); //object(tag_temple) (1)
CreateObject(1528,-1672.64135742,-755.83288574,42.45738220,0.00000000,0.00000000,60.00000000); //object(tag_seville) (1)
CreateObject(1531,-1582.73779297,-791.60192871,50.39455414,0.00000000,0.00000000,341.75000000); //object(tag_azteca) (1)
CreateObject(10183,-1716.45605469,-731.98535156,39.13609314,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(ferspaces) (1)
CreateObject(2780,-1680.84436035,-759.56060791,40.09263611,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(cj_smoke_mach) (1)
CreateObject(2780,-1681.64074707,-760.77166748,40.09619904,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(cj_smoke_mach) (5)
CreateObject(2780,-1681.20324707,-761.65979004,40.15536499,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(cj_smoke_mach) (6)
CreateObject(2780,-1681.72204590,-763.86743164,39.20737076,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(cj_smoke_mach) (7)
CreateObject(3461,-1680.81970215,-762.17065430,38.86904526,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(tikitorch01_lvs) (1)
CreateObject(3461,-1680.65466309,-761.45507812,38.82986069,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(tikitorch01_lvs) (2)
CreateObject(3461,-1680.42651367,-761.88946533,38.63750076,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(tikitorch01_lvs) (3)
CreateObject(3461,-1683.01965332,-760.84210205,38.18537140,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(tikitorch01_lvs) (4)
CreateObject(3461,-1683.23388672,-760.47564697,38.32959747,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(tikitorch01_lvs) (5)
CreateObject(3461,-1684.47204590,-758.97686768,38.09226227,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(tikitorch01_lvs) (6)
CreateObject(3461,-1683.74047852,-759.97717285,38.24272156,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(tikitorch01_lvs) (7)
CreateObject(3091,-1706.97949219,-751.35864258,37.35935211,1.24542236,358.49365234,295.02661133); //object(imy_track_barrier) (5)
CreateObject(3091,-1704.75549316,-754.97534180,37.57249832,1.23883057,355.98883057,315.82543945); //object(imy_track_barrier) (6)
CreateObject(3091,-1655.27575684,-778.63696289,42.65472031,1.23733521,2.98611450,205.67248535); //object(imy_track_barrier) (7)
CreateObject(3091,-1659.77380371,-779.30328369,42.42047882,1.23425293,4.23306274,166.14233398); //object(imy_track_barrier) (8)
CreateObject(1238,-1667.62133789,-776.01751709,41.89176178,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (69)
CreateObject(1238,-1674.98144531,-772.11358643,41.22833633,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (70)
CreateObject(1238,-1683.01818848,-767.72882080,40.44370651,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (71)
CreateObject(1238,-1690.67687988,-763.61181641,39.65380096,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (72)
CreateObject(1238,-1698.25439453,-759.34698486,38.76565933,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (73)
CreateObject(18451,-1678.38818359,-761.66674805,40.80712128,0.00000000,0.00000000,229.75003052); //object(cs_oldcarjmp) (1)
CreateObject(1238,-1674.02294922,-764.74066162,40.93304825,0.00000000,250.74972534,0.00000000); //object(trafficcone) (74)
CreateObject(2690,-1661.22644043,-761.94000244,43.20967865,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(cj_fire_ext) (1)
CreateObject(2690,-1672.52368164,-756.07092285,41.97125244,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(cj_fire_ext) (2)
CreateObject(2690,-1684.71960449,-749.43353271,40.30050278,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(cj_fire_ext) (3)
CreateObject(2690,-1648.78027344,-767.79553223,44.23051071,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(cj_fire_ext) (4)
CreateObject(1352,-1721.33459473,-753.25805664,34.30024338,0.00000000,0.00000000,244.00000000); //object(cj_traffic_light3) (1)
CreateObject(1352,-1649.31689453,-779.95233154,41.11743164,0.00000000,0.00000000,61.99536133); //object(cj_traffic_light3) (2)
CreateObject(3578,-1648.87341309,-785.32647705,42.47547150,353.75024414,359.49700928,65.94525146); //object(dockbarr1_la) (1)
CreateObject(934,-1653.44592285,-773.03149414,43.83155060,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(generator_big) (1)
CreateObject(934,-1603.21948242,-794.23571777,48.32732391,356.75308228,2.50402832,101.39187622); //object(generator_big) (2)
CreateObject(16304,-1553.01916504,-805.39984131,51.68318558,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(des_gravelpile05) (1)
CreateObject(16302,-1534.63134766,-808.57653809,53.30659866,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(des_gravelpile04) (1)
CreateObject(3578,-1722.57812500,-754.67822266,35.40326691,353.74945068,1.00360107,61.35430908); //object(dockbarr1_la) (3)/*
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Objects converted: 145
Vehicles converted: 6
Vehicle models found: 5
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In the time this conversion took to finish the US national debt has risen by about $16,317.53!
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nimm's mir nicht übel aber ich finde so Baustellen und/oder Unfälle unnötig.
Für deine erste Map sieht's gut aus.
7p
VieleIcht nimmst du ein paar unnötige Objekte raus damit das so überfüllt aus sieht, aber ansonsten kann man nicht mäkern.