Krankenhaus by Mesow

Lift · 27. Februar 2012

Hay Leuts,

ich habe mich aus Langeweile hingesetzt und eineMap gemacht. Es ist nix besonderes aber ich würde gerne mal ein Feetback bekommen wie ihr sie findet udn was ich ändern könnte. Falls euch die Map gefällt könnt ihr sie natürlich auch benutzen .

Bilder: Hier!

Code: [b][u]OnGameModeInit[/u][/b]
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Mit freundlichen Gruß
Mesow

Eddy · 27. Februar 2012

Naja kann man noch bisschen besser Gestallten 6/10

AhaEinHunter · 28. Februar 2012

hmm ich find das passt da Überhaupt net hin daher leider nur

5/10

mfg

DHDesign · 28. Februar 2012

Irgendwie gar nicht mein Geschmack

4/10

Sabrina95 · 28. Februar 2012

Passt nicht soganz hin irgendwie

Aber für die Ganze Mühe die du dir gemacht hast

5/10

DeCode · 28. Februar 2012

2/10
Mühe schön und gut, jedoch sind meine 2 Punkte für die Mühe, aber es gibt leider keine für das gemappte an sich.
Ich finde es sieht nicht grade gut aus, also ich würde, wenn ich als Spieler das auf einem Server sehen würde, den Server direkt leaven.
Du solltest dich lieber 2 Stunden länger dran setzen und mal schauen das du zb. vernünftige Treppen nimmst (Finde ich sehen mies aus an dem Punkt) und dir auch für deine Gebäude einen guten Platz aussuchst, damit es halt nicht, wie hier passiert, total am falschen fleck aussieht (Also nicht reinpasst optisch).
Mit 1 Monat übung dürfteste aber den Kniff rauskriegen.