Hab mir mal die Mühe gemacht und den Text abgeschrieben.
Hier nun die verbesserung meinerseits:
Welcome to Dream-Roleplay
A new area starts this summer.
Complete new systems, new features, new specials and any (-> much) more.
Dont forgot (-> forget) to like us on Facebook.
All informations about Dream-Roleplay are also on our Twitter page.
You can ask all your questions in (-> on) our forum.You can find this adress in the video description. (-> The forum adress will be in the video description)You can together with our community talk about Dream-Roleplay (-> Together with our community you can talk about the new systems within Dream-Roleplay. Topics about god and the world belongs to our Off-Topic section.)
Visit our homepage and get a nice bonus for the start at Dream-Roleplay (-> when Dream-Roleplay finally starts).Playing with your friends can add more fun (-> Also you can invite your friends to have more fun while you're gaming).
Surprise us (-> Subscribe to us) and get a message if we upload a new information video.
Thanks and goodbye!
Ich denke mal es dürfte klar sein was wie gemeint ist.
Das wäre nur eine verbesserung meinerseits. Andere denken wieder anders wie ich
- LolRiTTeR