Sky Club| Haus

Wichtiger Hinweis: Bitte ändert nicht manuell die Schriftfarbe auf schwarz sondern belasst es bei der Standardeinstellung. Somit tragt ihr dazu bei dass euer Text auch bei Verwendung unseren dunklen Forenstils noch lesbar ist!

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    8/10 Punkte


    Es ist zwar der Richtige Ort. Aber 2 Sachen sind nicht besonders gut.


    1. Die Treppe ist estwas seltsam. Mittig der treppe ist auf einmal das Geländer Quer über die Stufe, man muss also springen.
    2. Wenn man oben ist und der Aufzug weg ist, ist da ja so eine Platte auf dem Boden. Doch wenn man /clubup macht geht die sofort auf.


    Noch eine kleinigkeit:
    Das Icon ist irgendwie komisch um auf das Dach zukommen. Vielleicht lieber ein Pfeil dort hin machen.


    Das war jetzt meine Meinung. Ist dir aber ansonsten gelungen.

    Wie sind die ID´s von den Glasscheiben und von dem Lift ?


    Gute Mapp finde ich 10/10

    Die .pwn Datei ist weder ein Funktionierendes FilterScript noch ein Funktionierender GameMode...
    Außerdem ist das Script nicht schön gecodet...


    Zur Map, Die Treppe ist unpassend und der Dreck und das Grünzeug ebenfalls, durch die Zäune kann man einfach durchlaufen...
    Der Lift ist ne schöne Idee aber auch der ist meiner Meinung nach viel zu eng (es gibt ja jetzt seit 0.3c nen anständigen)
    Oben ist nicht viel los, Wände sind nur die vom Haus was nicht gut aussieht, Boden/Decke passen auch nicht wirklich, die Bar hängt viel zu tief im Boden rum und ansonsten kann man dort oben nichts großartig bestaunen...


    Gute Idee aber in der ausführung zum teil große schwächen...

    Das FS funzt nich
    #include forward clubtimer();new clubaufzugtor;new skyunten;new skyoben;new clubaufzug;#define COLOR_YELLOW 0xF1FE01FF#define COLOR_GREY 0xAFAFAFAA#if defined FILTERSCRIPT
    public OnFilterScriptInit(){print("\n--------------------------------------");print(" Blank Filterscript by your name here");print("--------------------------------------\n");return 1;}
    public OnFilterScriptExit(){return 1;}
    #else
    main(){print("\n----------------------------------");print(" Blank Gamemode by your name here");print("----------------------------------\n");}
    #endif
    public OnGameModeInit(){Create3DTextLabel("[Sky Club]\n/clubup",COLOR_YELLOW,1468.3732,-1575.6045,23.5469,8,0);CreatePickup(1314,1,1468.3732,-1575.6045,23.5469,0);skyunten=CreatePickup(1310,1,1468.3409,-1554.0687,50.1297,0);skyoben=CreatePickup(1310,1,1468.5470,-1554.0897,53.6656,0); clubaufzugtor=CreateObject(5422,1469.1096191406,-1575.6079101563,48.927719116211,0.25,91.455017089844,0); clubaufzug=CreateObject(3117, 1468.0146484375, -1575.5068359375, 22.436944961548, 0, 0, 268.94067382813);CreateObject(3095, 1471.0395507813, -1560.8334960938, 48.576229095459, 0, 0, 0);CreateObject(3095, 1471.0180664063, -1551.9943847656, 48.574310302734, 0, 0, 359.75);CreateObject(3095, 1473.421875, -1573.2607421875, 48.560119628906, 0, 0, 0);CreateObject(3095, 1471.029296875, -1569.44921875, 48.567943572998, 0, 0, 0);CreateObject(8650, 1468.0322265625, -1577.3828125, 37.312232971191, 270.12634277344, 0, 269.42321777344);CreateObject(8650, 1468.0341796875, -1573.6743164063, 37.36351776123, 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    CreateObject(3461, 1485.4713134766, -1579.4781494141, 24.121887207031, 0, 0, 0);CreateObject(3461, 1466.7564697266, -1579.7860107422, 24.121887207031, 0, 0, 0);CreateObject(3472, 1478.0133056641, -1563.6890869141, 22.546875, 0, 0, 0);CreateObject(870, 1475.1700439453, -1563.7396240234, 22.788997650146, 0, 0, 0);CreateObject(870, 1477.2928466797, -1565.6029052734, 22.788997650146, 0, 0, 0);CreateObject(871, 1479.7578125, -1564.4562988281, 22.829936981201, 0, 0, 0);CreateObject(869, 1478.0290527344, -1561.0827636719, 22.996696472168, 0, 0, 0);CreateObject(1360, 1463.63671875, -1579.6043701172, 23.333532333374, 0, 0, 0);CreateObject(950, 1471.5783691406, -1553.1663818359, 26.426502227783, 0, 0, 0);CreateObject(1361, 1463.4681396484, -1582.3856201172, 23.290218353271, 0, 0, 0);CreateObject(3450, 1479.0869140625, -1568.810546875, 24.592761993408, 0, 0, 0);CreateObject(3450, 1481.5789794922, -1542.2446289063, 24.593980789185, 0, 0, 0);CreateObject(8167, 1493.2250976563, -1580.3862304688, 23.736478805542, 0, 0, 0);CreateObject(8167, 1468.4555664063, -1583.1256103516, 23.736478805542, 0, 0, 89.824493408203);CreateObject(8167, 1490.5863037109, -1583.1932373047, 23.736478805542, 0, 0, 90.324462890625);CreateObject(8167, 1481.2191162109, -1582.9367675781, 23.736478805542, 0, 0, 268.94067382813);CreateObject(8167, 1462.8620605469, -1580.2790527344, 23.721841812134, 0, 0, 0);return 1;}
    public OnGameModeExit(){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerRequestClass(playerid, classid){SetPlayerPos(playerid, 1958.3783, 1343.1572, 15.3746);SetPlayerCameraPos(playerid, 1958.3783, 1343.1572, 15.3746);SetPlayerCameraLookAt(playerid, 1958.3783, 1343.1572, 15.3746);return 1;}
    public OnPlayerConnect(playerid){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerDisconnect(playerid, reason){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerSpawn(playerid){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerDeath(playerid, killerid, reason){return 1;}
    public OnVehicleSpawn(vehicleid){return 1;}
    public OnVehicleDeath(vehicleid, killerid){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerText(playerid, text[]){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerCommandText(playerid, cmdtext[]){if(strcmp("/clubup",cmdtext,true)==0){if(!PlayerToPoint(30.0,playerid,1468.3732,-1575.6045,23.5469)){return 1;}else{MoveObject(clubaufzug,1468.0146484375,-1575.5068359375,48.937004089355,3);SetTimer("clubtimer",15000,false);SendClientMessage(playerid,COLOR_GREY,"The lift is going up. It will go down after 15 seconds.");MoveObject(clubaufzugtor,1470.8916015625,-1575.5278320313,48.927719116211,0.5);return 1;}}return 0;}
    public OnPlayerEnterVehicle(playerid, vehicleid, ispassenger){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerExitVehicle(playerid, vehicleid){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerStateChange(playerid, newstate, oldstate){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerEnterCheckpoint(playerid){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerLeaveCheckpoint(playerid){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerEnterRaceCheckpoint(playerid){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerLeaveRaceCheckpoint(playerid){return 1;}
    public OnRconCommand(cmd[]){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerRequestSpawn(playerid){return 1;}
    public OnObjectMoved(objectid){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerObjectMoved(playerid, objectid){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerPickUpPickup(playerid, pickupid){ if(pickupid==skyoben){SetPlayerPos(playerid,1470.8446,-1556.7472,50.1316);SetCameraBehindPlayer(playerid);}
    if(pickupid==skyunten){SetPlayerPos(playerid,1477.2173,-1555.4341,53.6549);SetCameraBehindPlayer(playerid);}


    return 1;}
    public OnVehicleMod(playerid, vehicleid, componentid){return 1;}
    public OnVehiclePaintjob(playerid, vehicleid, paintjobid){return 1;}
    public OnVehicleRespray(playerid, vehicleid, color1, color2){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerSelectedMenuRow(playerid, row){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerExitedMenu(playerid){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerInteriorChange(playerid, newinteriorid, oldinteriorid){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerKeyStateChange(playerid, newkeys, oldkeys){return 1;}
    public OnRconLoginAttempt(ip[], password[], success){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerUpdate(playerid){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerStreamIn(playerid, forplayerid){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerStreamOut(playerid, forplayerid){return 1;}
    public OnVehicleStreamIn(vehicleid, forplayerid){return 1;}
    public OnVehicleStreamOut(vehicleid, forplayerid){return 1;}
    public OnDialogResponse(playerid, dialogid, response, listitem, inputtext[]){return 1;}
    public OnPlayerClickPlayer(playerid, clickedplayerid, source){return 1;}


    public clubtimer(){MoveObject(clubaufzug,1468.0146484375, -1575.5068359375, 22.436944961548,3);MoveObject(clubaufzugtor,1469.1096191406,-1575.6079101563,48.927719116211,0.5);return 1;}
    public PlayerToPoint(Float:radi, playerid, Float:x, Float:y, Float:z){ if(IsPlayerConnected(playerid)){new Float:oldposx, Float:oldposy, Float:oldposz;new Float:tempposx, Float:tempposy, Float:tempposz;GetPlayerPos(playerid, oldposx, oldposy, oldposz);tempposx = (oldposx -x);tempposy = (oldposy -y);tempposz = (oldposz -z);//printf("DEBUG: X:%f Y:%f Z:%f",posx,posy,posz);if (((tempposx < radi) && (tempposx > -radi)) && ((tempposy < radi) && (tempposy > -radi)) && ((tempposz < radi) && (tempposz > -radi))){return 1;}}return 0;}
    krig da immer undefined symbol playertopoint


    Für die Map 3/10 finde es etwas unsauber gemappt, aber den Platz wo du es gemappt hast find ich perfekt. :thumbup:</a_samp>


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    //edit: schriftgröße geändert

    LACHFLACH was ist das auch für nen code da kann aber einer mal voll nicht scripten hammer geil ;D;D


    Map 1/10 nur schlecht finde ich nix besonderes bei


    MFG